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OK. GET THIS i'M REALLY GOOD AT WRITING BECAUSE I'VE BEEN A FINALIST IN THREE WRITNG ASSIGHNMENTS, PLUS I WAS SECOND PLACE IN VFW'S PATRIOT'S PEN. COOOOL! LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL!-AND SCREEM-i WILL!!!!!!!!
--LEA, 11

Hey Joyce, YOUR BACK! Rock on, girl!
--Humble Hop, 11

this is a poem/partial song about this guy i used to *like* but now i don't. you smiled at me from across the room/could you hear my heartbeat and it all seemed so soon/when we were best friends, you sat next to me/and i never thought it would come so easily/i was sitting in my room listening to a CD/ when i knew/my feelings had changed/my feelings had changed/two years later we're still broken up/do i regret it and i've gotta say nope/i was being crushed under you and your looks/i'm normally so quiet just me and my books/why didn't i see/what you really were/now my feelings have changed/my feelings have changed
--SofiaS, 11

Excerpt from my novel, Black Holly: I sighed, looking at my long black hair in the mirror. It looked like a black waterfall down to my feet. My cat-shaped green eyes, slanted eyebrows, more defined cheekbones, and higher forehead made for a very exotic look. I fingered my pointed ears. My mom came in. She had taken her spell off. She looked like what she was, an elf, now. “Honey, do you need anything?” “No Mom, I’m fine.” She left, humming a song by The Beatles. I concentrated, and morphed back from my elf form to Sam. I was born with this power. My mom is an elf, my dad ran off when I was born. He was a human. I morph back when I’m sleeping, which is why I stay up all night at sleepovers. It’s not like I have to use my power, it’s more like I have to let it out. When I’m very relaxed, it slips out, and I morph into one of the Fey. It’s a good thing I never had surgery. End Excerpt. More sometime or other....
--I Am Rated R, 11

Hi guys!My name is Trina.Here is a poem I wrote called Heartz. I write ur intials on my notebook,and circle them with little hearts. I hide my fellings with a smile when u look at me from afar. Each night I'm thinking about u,and cant get any sleep. When I see u at school I keep telling my self to breathe. Its harder and harder. No one said it was easy. I gotta keep u outta my head. and keep my self from falling.
--Ke$haFan13, 13

Super Mario Adventures, Part 3 Luigi: I think Mario told me to meet him in Bob-Omb battlefield. *Jumps into painting* Mario: There you are, Luigi! Come on, we need to recover power stars! Luigi: I found a silver one, here! *Hands star to Mario* Mario: Alright, come on. Luigi: Hiii-yah! *Ground pounds on Goomba* Mario: Look out! *Luigi gets hit with waterbomb* Mario: Are you ok? Luigi: Yeah, it was just a waterbomb. Mario: HaA!! *Punches Goomba, then grabs coin* *Luigi does the exact same as Mario* Mario: *Grabs Power Flower* I'm gonna get a bird's eye view of things. *Inflates with air* I see... nothing new really. -POP!- Luigi: I'll get those coins! Mario: A Bob-Omb is coming! He's lit! -POW!- Mario:... Luigi: NO! To Be Continued!
--Josh, 12

Super Mario Adventures, Part 2 Luigi:HEEHEEHEE! *Hits W block, grabs Wario cap that falls out* Wario: Huh? Where's my precious cake!?! Wario:OOOOO! GREEN HAT!! *picks up Luigi cap, puts it on* Luigi: Huh, some guy's cake. Luigi(Hits ? block, 1-Up mushroom falls out):Tasty!*Eats mushroom* *hits ? block, coins fall out* *Collects coins* *Hits 2 more ? blocks, a Koopa Shell and Giant mushroom fall out* Luigi: YUMMY! ANOTHER MUSHROOM!! *Eats mushroom* Luigi: I think I'll go for a swim. *Jumps in small pool, swims a bit then gets out* *Hits 2 more ? blocks, a Koopa shell and giant mushroom fall out* Luigi: I guess a few more wouldn't hurt. *Eats mushroom* *Finds a 1-Up and Giant mushroom on ground, eats them* *Grabs power star* Luigi: A star? *Grabs Mario cap* Mario I guess I'll fly outta here. *Grabs wing cap from pocket, flies back to Peach's Castle* Luigi(Inside Castle) To Be Continued!
--Josh, 12

Super Mario Adventures, Part 1 Mario(In front of Peach's Castle):Ahhh... Peach's castle. Mario(Looking around):Where is everyone? Mario(Enters castle):I'll check inside. Mario(Inside):Hi, Toad! Mario(Looks up at sun shining through roof):Huh? Peach doesn't have a sunroof...(Starts disapearing)AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! Mario(Inside Wing Cap Course): Oh, I remember this place. as long as I'm here, I guess I'll fly around a bit. *Meanwhile...* Luigi(In strange place with unlimited power-ups):What is this place? Luigi(Grabs Giant mushroom)LLLLunch time! Luigi(Looking at Wario's Cap on ground):Hmm. Wario shouldn't be so careless! Luigi: Mario too! Sheesh! Heehee! *puts on Mario's cap* Luigi: What's happening?! AHHHHHHHHH!!! Mario(Where Luigi was standing): Huh? Luigi must have found Professor Egadd's invention. I'll swap with him.*Hits L block and grabs cap that falls out* Luigi(Swapped places with Mario):AWESOME!! To Be Continued!
--Josh, 12

I dont know if lyrics count but heres a section i wrote: every single day feels the same my heart cant be tamed my mind is boundless while my heart groundless escapeing is all i can think about now a new place and someone new the word is on the tip of my tounge while the purpose is lost running away is to much of a cost Its awkard but i'll confess your all i can think about you hung the sun above my world and let the darkness dissapear you leave a imprint on my mind and now i dont have a purpose to find Im so used to this cocoon im not ready to be a butterfly i'll wait here until forever passes by shield me from the outside world im falling from the sky so dont let me go you bring me the sun through you words you make my heart fly like a bird
--Serena, 12

I this one friend who ive always resented a little bit. She skipped a grade and she loved to brag about it. if she needed to be older for somthing she used her grade. And Visa Versa. dated the gut we both liked without a second thought, and expected me to sympathise when he broke up with her. One day she came to school, she was so upset, I let her cry on my shoulder until she calmed down enough to tell me what hapened. the night before her mom had had a seizure and didnt survive the ride to the hospital. Now everytime i think about what she did i just cant get mad anymore, knowing that after what happpend to her, we'll never be even again.
--Dare2BDifferent, 12

Wooooo hooo! My BIRTHDAY IS COMIN UP IN A WEEK! YAYAYAYAYAY! I CANNOT WAIT! ME AND MY FRIENDS ARE HAVING AN ALL NIGHT SLEEPOVER PARTY: NOT SLEEPING! yay! lol
--Joyce, 11

Yay michaeljacksonfan!!!!!!!!!!ur back!
--Green Kitty, 11

Joyce, 11: That's awesome! I hope something that bad never happens to anyone on here again!
--The Dangerous Summer, 12

Michealjacksonfan: I LOVE IT!-johnlennonfan
--Hannah

HEY GUYS! I AM BACK! I recovered fully from the crash. Thankfully. I'll start writing more stuff soon! Humble Hop 11, hiya! No, its not a story. It's real. You guys are all very nice here! Your like my own support group to fall back on lol. I LOVE YALL!
--Joyce, 11

YOOOOO-HOOOOOO!!!!! GUYS IM BACK!!!!! (I'm still I-CIE (12), but i had to use this one cause i missed it!) Hey Green Kitty, 11!! I missed u girl! Alright; new story; "If it's Breathing"!!!! Enjoy!! (p.s. i also wrote "Desperate") Chapter One “Get out!” the words rang in my head as I klutzily tripped out of our trailer park’s front door. My foster mom was again having financial problems, and I, to her, was just another mouth to feed, and just another stupid human; like everyone else in her world. My name is Josie. Josie W. My foster mother never told me what the ‘W’ in my name stood for, and, frankly, I do not think she really cares. My real birth-mom was killed in a car accident when I was only five years old, and my father didn’t have enough money to support me, so, on my seventh birthday, he said he knew someone kind who wanted to spend the day with me and make my birthday special. What I didn’t know or suspect, was that I’d have to spend the rest of my fifteen year old li
--Michealjacksonfan, 12

Just wanted to tell u guys that ur writing is AWESOME PERIOD. U guys are SO talented!!WOW.
--Green Kitty, 11

Hey everyone, Hannah back, author of Imagine! Just so you know, that excerpt is not the final work! I just need to edit things and type it all up, and then I'll be a 'Paperback Writer' ;)-johnlennonfan
--Hannah

shaft and almost fell in facefirst with the shock of what i saw.a mess of light brown hair. white rimmed dark bifocals.an orange streak.i was surely staring at the silent face of jeans stapler,from my middle school.i went home and fainted.
--cami, 12

seemed to remember something and growled,"never mind. do you want to fight or what?" "oh yeah!" i exclaimed gleefully.i am awesome at martial arts.he advanced warily,and i leaped into the air in a way so i could kick down violently.but suddenly i was frozen in midair."you may notice i have superpowers as well,"he cackled.at first he seemed to consider shooting me,but something strange appeared to click in his mind and he let me fall,a heap of insulted person,to the ground."youre wasting my time"he said with something odd in his voice,'but ill be back someday else."then he sprinted out the building.i just popped out near the door and kept hidden until he was in what i guess was his getaway car.could he drive?in an instant i was cramped up in the trunk and in a short while i heard a door slam.i waited a moment then popped out to find myself in a garage-a garage with a secret passage carelessly left open.cautiosly i peered down the
--cami, 12

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